Cover Letter Take 1

I'm taking a little detour, requesting help to make sure my cover letter sounds good.

Here it is...

To Whom It May Concern:

My name is Norma Dunning and I am applying for the position, ____________.  I believe I would be a great addition to your team,  I graduated from Kansas State University with a BA in Journalism, Mass Communication.  During that time and after, I was a staff writer for the college newspaper, I had my own radio show for the college radio station, and I was working as a news reporter and anchor for a local radio station in Manhattan, Kansas.

While there I had the chance to build relationships not only with my coworkers, but with legislators, county and city officials, the local school board, members of the military stationed at Fort Riley, Kansas, among others.  I covered numerous events and took pride in all the stories I created.

Though, I have taken some time away from that world, I am eager to get back in the game.  I am a quick learner and would greatly appreciate the opportunity to be a part of your team.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Norma Dunning

620-255-4187